Monthly Archives: September 2023

The Wind and the Rain by Anthony Wilson (Blue Diode Press)

The Wind and the Rain by Anthony Wilson (Blue Diode Press)

This is a sustained and flowing group of lyrical poems, many elegies for the author’s mother, despair and upset leavened with occasional glimpses of humour, and consistent clarity of observation and expression. It is also a book flooded with images of rain, used for scene-setting, metaphor, simile and as a link between poems.

It is not, however, a wet book . I generally struggle with poems that offer confessional outpourings and focus on feelings, but Wilson keeps an emotional distance from himself, and indulges in some wonderfully smartarse self-deprecation. In fact the second poem does this and warns the uninterested reader away:

     Like the poet
     who asked me at a party

     if she should have heard of me
     if you need to know what these poems

     are about
     you aren’t really interested.               (‘To My Rain’)

whilst others, such as ‘To the Wife of a Famous Poet’,  offer a vitriolic response:

     When you accosted me
     at the conference

     and shouted my name
     (though I stood one pace from your mouth)

     into the air,
     declaring it a

     useless 
     name for a poet
,

     what poisonous motivations
     thickened in your veins

Elsewhere there is both that outside looking at oneself and also a sense of bewilderment:

     During my creativity lecture
     in which not one soul

     had heard of Joni Mitchell
     it was raining         (‘With Hey, Ho, the Wind and the Rain’)

As a lecturer at a different university, this is a feeling I know all too well (in fact I once had a whole student group of lyric writers who hadn’t heard of Joni), but here of course the rain is not only physical but stands for grief. Life goes on but, but, but…  the rain, death and grief, are ever-present as the same four-part poem points out elsewhere (these are isolated excerpts; the dots are mine):

     When the rain came looking for me 
     I hid.



     The rain is keeping us prisoner.
     It takes even longer to die



     When I began writing
     about rain

     forty-seven poems ago
     I’d no idea

     it would take over
     my life.

The rain is ever present, seemingly even foreshadowing itself to ‘a lost child / wandering the zoo’ but also ‘a kind of memory / cleansing the roads’ (‘The Small Rain’). And just as water flows and evaporates away, absenting itself, death does the same to those we love, absence precipitating (rain again!) loss and grief: in an empty kitchen / we go on crying // because we go on / loving you.’ (‘Now and Not Yet’)

Elsewhere, there are often amusing, sometimes personal, anecdotes about the mother/son relationship, explorations of spiritual faith, doubt and the nature of prayer, and recollections and versions of events and conversations that happened despite and during the loss and grief: friends, relatives and the everyday crowding in on coming to terms with death. And here are those moments of humour I mentioned, even at the start of a serious poem like ‘Now and Not Yet’, already quoted above:

     We are in Tesco in Exeter
     waiting for a funeral.

     These dried pink and rubber things
     are scrambled eggs salmon and a bagel.

It is this clever use of the domestic and everyday, rooted in specifics, that makes Wilson’s ability to share what seems to be true stand out from the crowd of mawkish and self-obsessed books that also deal with grief. Under all the gentleness, Wilson is a survivor:

     It is still raining.
     I am still dancing.

     I am all
     memory.                   (‘With Hey, Ho, the Wind and the Rain’)

Even as these memories disturb and upset, even as he wonders about the possibility of an afterlife he is questioning and commenting:

     If there is one

     please God
     go easy on the rainbows. (‘It Raineth’)

Although Wilson suggests that ‘Either everything’s a poem / or nothing is’ and elsewhere that he is ‘tired of putting things into lines’ and ‘just wants to rest’, I am glad that he wrote this wonderful collection first. It is far, far more than things put in lines.

Rupert Loydell 23rd September 2023

Dark and Tender Principles by Mike Ferguson (Gazebo Gravy Press)

Dark and Tender Principles by Mike Ferguson (Gazebo Gravy Press)

It’s autumn, the sun has disappeared beyond clouds, it’s melancholic and it’s raining; in fact it’s been raining for days. Even though I mentally wake up a bit as the temperature drops, I can’t escape the fact that winter is on its way and a few depressing winter months wait ahead. Listening to the new Lloyd Cole album, On Pain (the titles says it all) and reading Mike Ferguson’s new pamphlet don’t help, although the latter – sonnets and other poems: July-September, 2023 – contain glimmers of optimism and light as it grapples with notions of memory, old age, darkness and uncertainty.

The narrator of these lyrical poems finds himself ‘beyond our precipice’ (‘July’), knows ‘what is missing but not why’ (‘Missing’) and takes refuge and delight in simple things around him: sycamore ‘helicopter’ seed pods in flight, fishing boats on the Devon coast, visits from a stray cat, ducks flying above the river estuary, the distant sound of hymns drifting from a nearby church. These are real, carefully observed and recalled moments, but they do not hold back the decline into the future:

     The sails are taking us nowhere.         (‘Sails’)

It gradually dawns on the reader, or should, that these poems are not writing as a gendered or regal plural, but about the narrator and a partner, a long term relationship and marriage. There is one discreet mention of ‘a progressive disease’ (‘Calico in Waiting’) which suddenly sheds light on what is underpinning these uneasy and gentle poems:

                                                                            This is
     our bifurcation, together and apart on journeys

     then and now. It is that plunge into darkness
     again and the rattles and moans and shudders.           (‘Roller Coaster’)

So, this poem is not only a memory about only one of a couple going on the Santa Cruz Giant Dipper whilst the one other one ‘stayed on land’, but it also vividly recalls the physical sensation of the ride whilst at the same time using it as a metaphor for separation. The text also comments on what the poem itself is doing:

                                                 Feeling existential
     this suffices when stripping away an emotive

     rise and fall to leave behind wood and its
     thunder and an awareness of age, these old-
     fashioned realities […]

Ferguson’s speaker, despite himself, is struggling in that darkness he has plunged into. There is no self-pity here as he offers up

                     further evidence of forgetting
     how to behave as if there is no change.        (‘Sometimes’)

although there is pertinent and considered reflection, particularly in ‘The Tenderness Principle’:

     We can all rise to our own level of ache
     when facing the paradoxes, and tenderness

     will hurt most. It is in those shadowy
     conflicts where remembrance and feelings

     break through, and in a moment of pure calm
     it is rebuke and retribution for the doubts.

     Incompetence registers too, dumb to the
     futility and fury: how it is unfair to treat

     your own pain with more pain.

This perhaps confessional writing, very different from Ferguson’s recent concrete texts and satirical political commentaries, takes its place alongside poetry collections such as Thom Gunn’s The Man With the Night Sweats, detailing the effects of AIDS both physically and mentally, and Douglas Dunn’s moving and mournful Elegies. It is emotional, clear-sighted and original without ever being self-indulgent, ‘a reminder of what would otherwise be lost.’ These studies of forgetfulness, despair and desperation, studded with jewelled moments from the past and present should definitely not be misplaced or abandoned.

Rupert Loydell 21st September 2023


A tribute to Gboyega Odubanjo

A tribute to Gboyega Odubanjo

No Reason

‘not understanding a prayer is no reason not to say amen’
    – Gboyega Odubanjo ‘Poems (With Drums)’

Not understanding loss is no reason not to keep looking

Not understanding grammar is no reason not to break the rules

Not understanding electricity is no reason not to flick the switch

Not understanding music is no reason not to make a noise

Not understanding silence is no reason not to keep quiet

Not understanding a poem is no reason not to read it

Not understanding death is no reason not to stay alive

Not understanding grief is no reason not to cry

Not understanding anything is no reason not to try


   © Rupert M Loydell 4th September 2023