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Broken Glossa by Stephen Bett (Chax Press)

Broken Glossa by Stephen Bett (Chax Press)

I’ve taken some time to get a handle on this new ‘alphabet book of post-avant glosa’ from Canadian poet Stephen Bett. Is the title a pun on ‘broken glass’ or is ‘broken’ to do with postmodern poetics and Betts’ deconstruction or re-invention of the glosa, which the blurb glosses [sic] as ‘a Renaissance Spanish Court form’? Both, and much else I suspect.

Bett’s version of the glosa is a kind of summary, critical reading of, biographical note and dialogue with, indeed a gloss on, the poets he has chosen to engage with. Each poem has a poet’s name followed by a colon and a phrase as a title, each includes quotations or adapted quotations from the poem, a response, and sections picking up on details (friends, attitudes, actions, diction, etc.) from the poets’ own work, as well as Betts’ own writing. They are at times funny, disrespectful, worshipful, undermining, critical or a kind of pastiche; sometimes all of these at once. Footnotes help explain or locate some of the references, and in one poem – about John Wieners – allegedly contains the poem (it doesn’t).

The book is a bit like being taken by Betts to a party. It’s good to see some mutual friends and acquaintances but difficult to get to know the strangers there, despite the introductions. On one level these poems seem insular, a kind of in-joke for those in the know. So, I mostly enjoyed the poems about, from or referencing Rae Armantrout, Charles Bernstein, Ted Berrigan, Paul Blackburn, Clark Coolidge, Robert Creeley, William Everson, Jackson Mac Low, Frank O’Hara, Charles Olson, Tom Pickard, Jeremy Prynne, Tom Raworth, Gary Snyder, Jonathan Williams, Derek Beaulieu and Guy Birchard, whose work I am familiar with; and had enough to get by on with Tom Clark, Ed Dorn, Hank Lazer, Ron Padgett, Peter Schjeldahl (whom I mostly know as an art critic), Jack Spicer, Lewis Walsh, Paul Violi, Philip Whalen and Jennifer Bartlett.

Why am I writing a list? Well, in a way this is a book that places Bett within a list or network of reading, fellow poets, influences and friends, and I want to do the same. It’s also to point out (although I am not going to list them) how many other poets here I know absolutely nothing about, and how few women there are here. I don’t want to get PC or self-righteous, but this is a book dominated by males: out of 67 poets here only six are women, which isn’t really on in 2023. At least make an effort Mr. Betts!

The poems themselves are convoluted, associative and tangential, often jocular, sometimes knowing and familiar. What, for instance should a reader make of ‘incidentally Pip, you never unzipped my appendicized letter’ in the Philip Lamantia poem which is mostly an exercise in surrealist and alchemical references. I’m assuming there is a sexual pun here, because elsewhere in the poem we are told that ‘psychic automatism lifts up its skirt’ and about ‘randy laddies’ with ‘cum stains on teeth’. However, I’m unsure is Betts is flirting, feeling rejected or just teasing?

To return to my party metaphor, I don’t mind being a wallflower and drinking quietly by myself, or hiding in the kitchen for a deep conversation with someone else who doesn’t know many others, but when everyone seems to be speaking a different language and playing non-party music, it’s weird. My ultimate take, however, is that it’s Betts talking strangely, not the poets who are his subjects; I don’t recognise his version of Tom Raworth, Robert Creeley, Tom Pickard et al, or their writing. The numerous footnotes suggest that the author knows he needs to explain what he has written, although sometimes they do the opposite and present yet another layer of elliptical allusion, whilst others seem like a namedrop or chance to include himself in the text. 

I so wanted to like this book, because there are so many important poets (canonically and personally) included, and also because I have enjoyed Bett’s other books, but I confess I don’t. Michael Rothenberg, on the back cover, mentions ‘lament, exultation, beat improvisation, pop incantation, mantric visitation’, and Orchid Tierney claims the work is not ‘just poems but dialogues, chants, and jokes with the poets on whom they riff.’ This may be true, or may be Betts’ intention, but ultimately Jeffrey Cyphers Wright is closer to summarising when he points out that Betts ‘riffs from an insider’s perspective’. Since I am not a member of the Beats or New York School, let alone a ‘Zen Cowboy’, I am somewhat lost in what Rothenberg calls’ the continuous song of the cosmic and eternal muse, reborn in Broken Glosa.’

Rupert Loydell 12th November 2023

Neptune’s Projects by Rishi Dastidar (Nine Arches Press)

Neptune’s Projects by Rishi Dastidar (Nine Arches Press)

I should have listened to George, who told me – after my rant about how wonderful Rishi Dastidar’s previous books Saffron Jack and Ticker Tape were – that I would tire of them pretty quickly, just as he had. Needless to say, I ignored him, and have returned to those two titles, but (and it’s a big but) this new book is mostly unsubtle, preachy and simply trying too hard.

I am no climate change denier and I am all for a bit of punning and topical discussion in poetry, but I really don’t need smartarse reinventions of mythology where Neptune is at a loss what to do with the human race who are destroying the planet. And if I see the word ‘anthropocene’ again I am going to scream.

What is a reader to do with the banalities of poems like this, reproduced here in its entirety?

     The waves speak happinness

     be the sea lion of your life |         | applaud your delight at being

This is worthy of Rupi Kaur herself! (And I haven’t even mentioned the misspelling of happiness.)

Elsewhere, there are kelpies, mermaids, seasalter cocktails, shipwreck champagne and wave after wave after wave of heavy-handed poems with a message. Unfortunately it’s a message that most of us have already heard and one that those who haven’t won’t come across because they don’t buy or read small press poetry books, or indeed any poetry book.

Dastidar knows this though. The book’s epigraph, from a song by the band Wilco reads ‘But I know you’re not listening / Oh I know you’re not listening’. The whole exercise seems one of authorial masochism (saddo masochism?), driven by content and an urge to persuade and explain rather than any sense of poetry or language. May I suggest that poetry is rarely the best place for protest, and that those concerned about human extinction (the Earth will be just fine without us) might take direct action rather than write poetry?

There is one section of Neptune’s Projects that shows some of the author’s previous flair for writing witty and topical poetry, which is a sequence entitled ‘Pretanic’. Here, Poldar turns his attention to the state of Britain, its politicians and the effect Brexit has had on us. ‘Tight Little Island’ discusses how we have ‘shipwreck[ed] our ambition’, whilst the brief three-line poem ‘Impossible Nation’ informs us that

     The one thing they fail
     to teach you at Eton is:
     don’t play with matches.

which made me laugh out loud, as did the next poem’s closing lines, which informs us that ‘You can’t be / weaned off glory, you know.’ (‘Imperial cosmic sickness’) The standout poem in the sequence is ‘The Brexit Book of the Dead’ which lashes out at everything it can: nostalgia, pride, sovereignty, war and ‘the imperial lorry /park formerly known as Kent’. 

This satire works for me, as it scoops up The Dambusters, the ‘History distortion field’ attached to Britain’s past, ‘Empire 2.0’, and ‘The Overblown Age’ that sees ‘the fifth horseman slowly flatten[ing] his horse into a burger for a delivery.’ What to do when the apocalypse comes? Not write well-meant poetry, obviously. Dastidar’s provocative suggestion, his seemingly bored shrug, is another brief satirical poem:

     Eating popcorn at the apocalypse

     Well, the cinemas are closed,
     so what else are we to do?

George was – damn it – partially right, but I hope Dastidar will take time to give himself distance from whatever his next book’s subject is and stay away from unsubtle polemic. When he is having fun with language, and takes potshots at everyone and everything, he is much more likely to hit his target, and the poetry is more innovative and readable. Rishi, don’t be a sea lion, be a poet, a wordsmith; help me prove George wrong.

Rupert Loydell 2nd November 2023