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And And And by Cole Swensen (Shearsman Books)

And And And by Cole Swensen (Shearsman Books)

Cole Swensen’s marvellous books have always been distinctive, each exploring a theme or concept, each adopting a form (or number of forms) best suited to their subjects, which have included art, hands, parks, garden design, views from a train, death, absence, memory and time. This new book is about poetry, about how language wanders, evokes, digresses and slips from both author’s and reader’s grasp; how language informs, perhaps rules and creates, our lives.

And And And mostly consists of prose poems, short lyrical texts at the top of each page, sometimes in brief sequences, sometimes circling back to earlier poems and ideas. The poems are inquisitive, exploratory, witty and impetuous, darting at language and words from all angles, never settling in one place, shifting and changing like the murmuration Swensen uses in ‘Language in Motion’ where she is thinking ‘of written language as a wave of migrating elements, swarming in different combinations through books, poems, newspapers, telegrams, etc.’, an idea she returns to a few pages later:

     Thinking of how alliteration and other consonant-based
     sound relationships stretch a text outward, ushering readers
     onward, through the poem and beyond, while vowel-based
     relationships, all forms of rhyme, off-rhyme, slant-rhyme
     assonance, etc. pull the text back in on itself, thus pulling
     readers back into the poem, sending them ricocheting around
     within it […]
               (from ‘Murmuration Again’ [force justified in original])

Swensen is well aware that nothing is fixed or final, that everything needs redefining. In her poem of the same name she asks ‘Can it be said that all definitions need constant adaptation, extension and reconsideration?’ I suspect so. In fact the whole book starts with the idea of ‘nuance’, likening it to a ship ‘slipping out of fog, and oddly more visible than a vessel less veiled.’ (‘The Ship’) She observes that for the watcher, the ship is ‘the shape of memory itself’, appears to remember itself, yet even as it becomes self-aware, the thought is deflected and the ship keeps coming towards us.

Fascinated by how language works, Swensen scratches away at the linguistic itches she finds, informed by her own reading, writing and creative practice, at one point revealing where she found her book’s title: in ‘And’ she is ‘Thinking about Deleuze & Guattari’s writings on and as a non-subordinating conjunction, allowing elements to be connected while also retaining complete relational equity and autonomy.’

This isn’t a book of academic philosophical linguistic discourse though; mostly it is rooted in the everyday. Yes, there are abstract questions, but they are linked to how we, or writers, use language, how we make or might make poems and texts, but other poems are rooted in the body and the world around us. ‘Thumb’ is about the physical odd finger, the animal-ness of the digit; ‘Clouds’ and ‘Wind’ discuss response, transience and the possibilities of form; ‘Shadows’ prompts discussion of translation and how writing may be ‘the shadow of that which cannot be said’.

My favourite poem in the book is ‘Connote’, which proposes an idea then explores it:

     I wonder if you can use words in such a way that only their
     connotations, and not their detonations, get activated. To
     connotate as one might cogitate or contemplate—a state
     chosen for its particular relation to thought—so that it’s not
     the definition (always restrictive) of the word that comes into
     play, but its fields of association, its overtones and undertones,
     those always expansive, radiating zones of suggestion and
     implication. […]
          (force justified in original)

In the second section of the poem, Swensen argues against herself, noting that adopting her proposed idea ‘might lead to a greatly restricted vocabulary’. This is a tactic several poems adopt, for instance noting that when we adopt the idea of fragmentation in poems, that still implies it is a fragment of something whole. This is slippery, open-ended discussion, although there are occasional declamations. I am especially keen on the notion that ‘There’s something about poetry that is always and necessarily anonymous, the one mode in which the stroke of the I serves only to sever’, although that may be a response to my students’ current assertions that poetry is about self-expression and emotion.

I could write more. Each time I dip into this book there is something new and thought-provoking, sometimes revelatory, other times quiet reflection: on why watching rain is soothing, about attention, landscape, wind, detective novels, ‘The privatization of memory’. It is a book of poetry and of poetics, a book of questions, possible answers, reflections and language, a way – as it says in ‘Winds’ – of ‘keeping every other possible option always in mind.’ It is challenging, informative and quietly provocative. And lots of other things too.

Rupert Loydell 24th October 2023

Jargon Busters by Clive Gresswell (KFS Press)

Jargon Busters by Clive Gresswell (KFS Press)

In this remarkably powerful first collection of poems Clive Gresswell combines what Timothy Jarvis refers to on the back as “language experiments, raw humour, obscenity, keen-eyed observation” with a compelling lyricism. Jarvis connects this uncompromising world of language with that of the French philosopher Gilles Deleuze quoting him as describing how the writer of potent literature will return “from what he has seen and heard with bloodshot eyes and pierced eardrums”. In an excellent book on Deleuze, Sensation, Contemporary Poetry and Deleuze, Continuum, (I reviewed this book in The Use of English, Vol. 62, Number 1,soon after it appeared in 2010) Jon Clay referred to Prynne’s 1994 sequence Her Weasels Wild Returning. Quoting from the opening poem, ‘The Stony Heart of Her’, Clay wrote about “a material force that can be felt in the mouth and in the body”:

“This is obscurely connected to the vitality of the poetry; so, too, is the fact that both the dynamism and the material feel of the language are intensified by the undeniable difficulty of understanding what the lines might be supposed to represent. This material and aesthetic prominence in the poetry causes it to stand forwards, to exist in the way that a table or a mountain exist, rather than signalling away from itself towards, or signifying, the existence of something else. This urgent, material existence impinges upon a reader’s experience.”

There are sixty-six poems packed into Gresswell’s explosive new production from Alec Newman’s The Knives Forks And Spoons Press and number 39 reflects the tone of authority which threads its way throughout the sequence:

“where plagued soldiers ovulate & sing-song
abashed among weeds infamy
to tell stranger stories inherited
dust books dishevelled plumage frightening
new regulars distance overhanging vowels
thumb & forefinger trace elopements
a trigger-happy resolution bursts out
ripples circumnavigate
stars squashed into night dust
hunted tinsel sounds a tiny
belonging questions
where this arrow fell
quivering into your habit
fresh on the ground
a flower-study of you grew chased away bitter dregs
a woman’s flesh betrayed”

Writing about Prynne, Jon Clay had asserted that the sense of authority in Weasels “is the result of an aesthetic force that is not so much accessible as undeniable”. This is authority which avoids “truth faithfully represented” but which asserts its importance in the world “forcefully claiming its own absolute”. In Gresswell’s poem the focus upon “trigger-happy” is presented visually with “thumb & forefinger” and the violence connecting shooting with sexual activity is merged as the world of soldiers and ovulation moves inexorably forward to an arrow’s destination which finds itself quivering in the dress of an innocent “fresh on the ground”. This “sing-song” recitation of “stranger stories” concludes with “a woman’s flesh betrayed”.
In the 2003 book What is Philosophy?, Deleuze and the psychoanalyst Félix Guattari asserted that Art did not have opinions:

“Art undoes the triple organization of perceptions, affections, and opinions in order to substitute a monument composed of percepts, affects, and blocks of sensations that take the place of language. The writer uses words, but by creating a syntax that makes them pass into sensation that makes the standard language stammer, tremble, cry, or even sing: this is the style, the tone, the language of sensations, or the foreign language within language that summons forth a people yet to come…The writer twists language, makes it vibrate, seizes hold of it, and rends it in order to wrest the percept from perceptions, the affect from affections, the sensation from opinion – in view, one hopes, of that still-missing people.”

Jon Clay referred to Prynne’s 1994 sequence in terms of its doing something aesthetically that was very powerful and recognised the significance of that aesthetic force. One little element of that aesthetic web in the Prynne sequence is the titles given to individual poems echoing those in the sequence by Ben Jonson, ‘A Celebration of CHARIS in ten Lyrick Peeces’. Jonson’s sequence of ten poems opened with ‘His Excuse for loving’, ‘How he saw her’ and ‘What hee suffered’. Prynne’s Weasels, a sequence in seven pieces, opens with ‘The Stony Heart of Her’, ‘What She Saw There’ and ‘Then So Much She Did’. Similarly in Clive Gresswell’s poem number 40 there is a sly echo perhaps of Bertolt Brecht’s ‘The Chalk Cross’ from Poems of The First Years of Exile. Gresswell’s world of violence and betrayal is anger spat from “scabbard” and “trapeze” that becomes “footprints meshed / in circular / nazi regalia”. This is a world in which “faces implode / meld into re-workings” and “tears of silent mothers / draw flesh/ flattering thorn”. It concludes with un trahison de putain:

“walk into my path
turn away
i mark your back
a huge red cross in lipstick”

In Brecht’s poem from those early years of Nazi betrayals a maidservant has an affair with a man from the SA who shows her how they go about catching grumblers:

“With a stump of chalk from his tunic pocket
He drew a small cross on the palm of his hand.
He told me, with that and in civvies
He’d go to the labour exchanges
Where the unemployed queue up and curse
And would curse with the rest and doing so
As a token of his approval and solidarity
Would pat anyone who cursed on the shoulder-blade,
Whereupon the marked man
White cross on his back, would be caught by the SA.”

Clive Gresswell’s first collection of poems concludes with a reference to “offshore companies” and “distinguished crowns”. In the aftermath of Grenfell Tower and housing shortages his is a voice not to be ignored. He may give the last line as

“a jester turns his back on the world”

but we would be short-sighted if we forgot the role of the “all-licensed fool”.

Ian Brinton, 7th August 2017