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The Yellow Kite by Vicki Feaver (Mariscat Press)

The Yellow Kite by Vicki Feaver (Mariscat Press)

As the poetry demographic, like the general population demographic, trends Homewards and Carewards, you might well hypothesize related trends in its subject-matter. Proportionally fewer new poems, for instance, about sex, pop, casual jobs and feeling zingy with energy. And proportionally more about grandchildren, paintings, gardening – and illness. Parkinson’s is the second most common neurodegenerative disorder after Alzheimer’s and the fastest-growing neurological condition globally, but if there’s been a single-poet collection about it before, I don’t know of one. Vicki Feaver’s new pamphlet is about living with it.

Vicki Feaver is best known for disciplined poems dealing with undisciplined, sometimes violent, emotions – her most famous being about Judith and Holophernes – and Parkinson’s will certainly provoke them. Here it’s like an indwelling demon. In one poem it’s addressed directly: ‘You were in her years/ but waited to show’. In another it becomes the speaker, addressing its victim with sinister glee:

          Your voice that you hear
          loud and clear in your ear
          is to others a mumble

          that no repeating
          of tongue twisters
          or singing up and down

          quavery scales
          will stop sounding
          like a whisper from a coffin.

It makes her shake so much that the shaking feels like her defining attribute: she becomes ‘the shaking woman’. She’s unsteadier – and falls over and breaks a hip. Even taking a bath becomes a risk and struggle. There’s the double-checking of thoughts, conveyed by pantoums. There’s the disruption to self-image:

          Who is the woman in the mirror?
          Is she the same woman as yesterday?
          Why does she always appear?
          Why look at me suspiciously?

And especially the difficulty finding words:

          A rat that gnawed
          through her skull
          into her brain
          is devouring her words
          as if they are grain.

As if that’s not enough, the Covid crisis – ‘a year/ of sickness and death’ – is going on. Nonetheless, she attempts to take what pleasure she can in a circumscribed lifestyle. Her local area, ‘where trees and sea/ meet’, her home ‘hemmed in by hills and spiky firs’, her husband, her dog – those statutory topics of the poetry of senescence get an additional poignancy here not just from the usual perception that death is on the horizon, but that the slope going towards it is going to be so difficult. Flowers, birds, trees, seasons, all normally so profuse in symbolism for this type of poet, are now becoming equivocal, dismissible or minatory. The kingfisher is a mere ‘hunter-killer’. Magpies are ‘just birds/ with a reputation as thieves’. The lapwing makes a disconcerting ‘weep-weep’. A tree in her garden ‘twirls a black lace veil’. 

But the book’s structured to suggest a path towards resistance, if not a happy ending. The third person, used at first to signal self-estrangement, moves to ‘I’ later on. There are ‘exercises/ to improve her balance’, and ‘co-careldopa’ – a medication – ‘to keep me moving’. She tries boxing which is ‘good for Parkinson’s’; it’ll ‘give a bully a bloody nose’. There’s a slim motif of revival in the desert. The yellow kite at the end, like ‘a fiery bird’, reminds her of a previous personal crisis, and bolsters her spirit. In all, it’s a book representing the ups and downs and shames and struggles of major morbidity with candidness and not without grim humour, and its similarly plain vocabulary, syntax and theme make it an easy read, but a sobering one.  

Guy Russell 12th October 2025

Tears in the Fence 82 is out!

Tears in the Fence 82 is out!

Tears in the Fence 82 is now available at http://tearsinthefence.com/pay-it-forward and features poetry, prose poetry, translations, fiction, and creative nonfiction by Jeremy Hilton, Guillaume Apollinaire trans. Ralph Hawkins, Lydia Harris, Mandy Pannett, Mélisande Fitzsimons, Jennifer Harrison, Daragh Breen, Gul Ozseven, Michael Farrell, Hortense Chosalland, Laure-Hélène Zinguereevitch, Joanna Nissel, David Miller, Lisa Dart, John Mateer, Alan Baker, Geraldine Monk, Peter Oswald, Rebecca Danicic, Biljana Scott, Alexandra Fössinger. Chris Beckett, Eliza O’Toole, Peter Larkin, Martyn Crucefix, Kerri Sonnenberg, Aidan Semmens, Andrew Duncan, Mohammad Razai, Fianna Dodwell, Valerie Bridge, Lesley Burt, Victoria Brooks Helen Kay, Mark Goodwin, Isabel Greenslade, Huw Gwynn-Jones, Tamsin Hopkins, Steve Spence, Jason Ioannou, Claire Harnett–Mann, Sharon Kivland, Simon Collings and Gerald Killingworth.

The critical section consists of the Editorial by David Caddy, Robert Sheppard on A Line Of Tiny Zeros In The Fabric, Robert Hampson on Andrew Duncan’s Beautiful Feelings, Chris Turnbull on Jennifer Spector, Guy Russell on Dominic Hand, Mandy Pannett on J.R. Carpenter, Andrew Duncan on New German Poetry, Nadezhda Vikulina on Caroline Clark, Peter Oswald on Paul Stubbs, Mandy Pannett on Lynne Wycherley, Andrew Duncan on Rachel Mann, Keith Jebb on W.N. Herbert, Steve Spence on Arcadian Rustbelt, Robert Sheppard on Poetry’s Geographies, Steve Spence on Plymouth Language Club, Keith Jebb on Frances Presley, Morag Kiziewicz ‘s Electric Blue 17, Notes On Contributors, David Caddy’s Afterword 

Fabrics, Fancies & Fens by Gerald Killingworth (Tears in the Fence)

Fabrics, Fancies & Fens by Gerald Killingworth (Tears in the Fence)

The first section of Gerald Killingworth’s superb new collection is called ‘Fabrics’ and is preceded by the author’s note concerning his ‘sense of fabric’ which links closely with imagination. Readers will have their own mental images of fabrics but they’re unlikely to include some of the diverse objects in these poems such as bread, a drumskin, ancient scrolls, shrapnel, a gutted and carved up pig, a feather, and a marble fragment from a chiffonier top.

Extraordinary images, and in this section we have examples of extraordinary juxtapositions as well with graphic details linking humour and horror, the quotidian with the tragic. ‘Sambridges’, for example, begins with humour in its title, the mispronunciation of the word ‘sandwiches’. There is laughter and a feeling of comfort as the narrator nibbles the dry slices which gives him the chance ‘to get the feel and to remember’ but then, in an abrupt shift, we are suddenly in the middle of a battlefield where a sandwich is offered to fill the gap ‘between breakfast and dying’ and the mouldy bread parallels the decay of rotting bodies in the mud, the ‘cheese and jam already indistinguishable from the/ muck they fell in.’

‘Jack’s Drum’ is a subtle confrontation of the question of value. The drum with its softness derived from ‘the downy pelt’ of a calf is worth the cost because of the exquisite music it creates, but, in a clash between harmony and disharmony, no one hears ‘the silent sounds – the anguished/bleating, the stunning smack.’ 

‘Great Uncle Harry’ features in ‘I Have Four Children’, presenting an image of ‘elegance along a seafront somewhere, /complacent, dapper’. Someone else takes care of the pig he owns, the ‘feeding, killing, quartering’ while tender hearted Connie shows no qualms or queasiness when called on to ‘slice off a porker’s/nose and turn his jowls inside out.’ This, like war, is slaughter and mess off stage.

The second part of the collection, ‘Fancies’,  is full of sounds as well. In ‘May Morning, Cerne Abbas’ we are taken to ‘a hill of cloth of gold’ where the air is full of trumpets and horns and the vibrations of hundreds of cowslips – but all these sounds are ‘too subtle for us.’

I admire all the poems in Fabrics, Fancies & Fens but I think my favourite section is this one – ‘Fancies’ – which is clustered with magic, music, dance and, most of all, imagination. ‘True magic isn’t ready-made,’ says the narrator in ‘Poundbury Wassail’, ‘we need to conjure it defying all sorts of gloom.’ Speculative writing that explores possibilities beyond any current reality is a popular genre in fiction and is becoming more so in poetry with elements like science fiction, alternative histories, myth and its contemporary relevance. But fantasy with its cast of giants and fairy folk, its world of ‘what ifs’, is so much harder to write about in a way that’s both imaginative and ‘convincing’. Gerald Killingworth is an exceptional writer and achieves it, perfectly in my opinion, as poems in this collection show. 

He does this by creating an atmosphere of mystery and ambiguity, by inviting us to explore the curious and inexplicable, to share a glimpse of an ‘inner vision’. ‘I am a stranger facing down shadows’ his narrator says in ‘An Etruscan Tomb Outside Orvieto’ as he haunts the ‘dead streets’ and wonders if ancient deities and spirits ‘haunt ours and wonder what/the world has come to.’

This poem also gives an account of a strange experience where, at the threshold of the tomb, with not a plum tree in sight, the narrator sees two unripe plums ‘green as the/verdigris on an Etruscan bronze’ and wonders:

          Are they an offering from…whom? an 

          enticement from some shade? Their 

          greenness is unnatural – perpetual?

          like the hillsides of the afterlife painted in 

          tombs elsewhere, its music never-ending, 

          its wine never sour.

The final section of Fabrics, Fancies & Fens is titled ‘Fenlandia’ – a play on words and subtle allusions which appear throughout the collection and are a delight to come across. Many earlier themes and images recur – land here is ‘dissolved in water’ and it’s ‘water so/thick it has texture’. Sunrise in the Fens is a ‘bloody smudge’ while a downpour of rain is ‘incessant drum-rolling on the windows’ that later washes down ‘the bloodied tarmac/after another hit and run.’ The poem ‘The Bog Oaks’ recalls ‘an echo of centuries’:

       Millennia since their thoughts reached 

       cloudwards, branches feathering the unreachable.             

       Precipitation became intense, ground waters rose,

       reeds and sedges, confident, empire-building, 

       ingratiated themselves into every spinney:

Fabric, Fancies & Fens is a stunning collection – witty, lyrical, quirky and insightful. It is one to read many times. 

Mandy Pannett 22nd August 2025

Mate Arias by Lewis Buxton (The Emma Press)

Mate Arias by Lewis Buxton (The Emma Press)

This pamphlet of part-rhymed and unrhymed loose sonnets, which Lewis Buxton styles ‘arias’, repurposes its venerable form for satisfyingly down-to-earth subjects, and for poems of friendship rather than romantic love. The speaker and his mates are going to the gym, the pub and the seaside; they watch films and TV, play football, drink, smoke and eat take-away. He also enjoys, with other friends, slightly less archetypal pastimes: doing crosswords, talking about novels or going birdwatching. 

With its plain titling, familiar situations and everyday vocabulary, it’s a swift and easy read. The references are more commonly from TV, comic books and films (The Walking Dead, Marlon Brando in Streetcar, Christopher Walken and especially superheroes) than literature – though James Wright and Sally Rooney get a look-in. The verbal pleasures, likewise, are less about abstruse wordplay or sublime alliterations than charming and offbeat figurative language. Someone is like ‘an unexpected cup of tea’, and ‘an apple crumble and custard kind of bloke’. Obituaries are ‘the football statistics/ of truth’. Slovenly dressers are ‘bathtubs half-covered by shower curtains.’ The sea is ‘a blue duvet’. Such whimsical wit extends to the setups. In the ‘Sensitive Gentlemen’s Club’, ‘The bouncers all have trained therapy dogs’ and ‘you can pay for drinks with […] / completed mental health first aider handbooks.’ An appeal for new football team players is done like a lonely-hearts ad. There’s drolly attentive notice to quotidian moments: ‘nodding solemnly at the mention of money’ and ‘the deft mime of a signature mid-air.’ 

There are, nonetheless, serious issues among the conviviality. The agitations of adolescence elicit sympathy

          All the ghosts came home, crow-unlucky kids
          who were bullied bad (not that you can be
          bullied good, that is) but come home they did:
          soiled, cold and tired backpacks, acne.
          When they were home, speaking was stuck zips.
          What’s wrong? Mum asked, their skulls tucked into hoodies,
          their tongues football boots that did not fit:
          everything is luck, nobody will ever like me.

while the major motifs here, superheroes and horses (‘genitals/ open like a stallion in a field’), emblematize the culture’s impossible expectations of masculinity. ‘[L]et Lois Lane fall’ and ‘put my glasses on’ seem to be the wry recommendations in response, along with acknowledging that ‘We’ve left it too late/ […] to be prodigies’ and settling for the pleasures of the homespun and the unambitious alongside alternative images of personal development: ‘the sunflower man I could/ grow up to become’.

It feels like this review is becoming little more than snippets of things I enjoyed. And indeed, it’d be very hard to dislike this short collection; it’s the kind of pamphlet you might buy for a friend who thinks of poetry as only up-itself or overly intellectual or otherwise not for them. For instance, it’s one of those refreshing, rather rare collections that never uses the words ‘poet’, ‘poem’ or ‘poetry’. It tunes more to the wavelength of relatable experience than of the recondite. Most of all, it comes across as the nicest kind of companion in its unpretentious kindness, its unabashed mansuetude, its understanding of gender as performance, and its humorous balance of gruffness and tenderness: ‘[…] I love her/ and how we talk as if we do not also suffer’; and, ‘We grow so beautiful/ galloping into oncoming collisions’; and, ‘I judge books by their covers/ and I really like your jacket.’ It’s hard not to just keep quoting from it, which is as good a sign as any. 

Guy Russell 13th August 2025

Marginal Future by S.J. Litherland (Smokestack Books)

Marginal Future by S.J. Litherland (Smokestack Books)

The subjects of S.J. Litherland’s new book are mainly her familiar ones: a Warwickshire childhood with a harsh father and memories of WW2, her adopted Durham (coal-mining elegies, local issues), other personally significant locations (especially her parents’ house in Mallorca), current affairs (Brexit and Covid here) and a poem ‘for Barry’ (MacSweeney). This 142-page chubster also makes plenty of room for paintings, gardening, her home and its surroundings, the weather, ageing and family. Less standardly, there are more of her distinctive poems about cricket and about her visits to the USSR. 

The variety of style, however, has a few surprises for Litherland-watchers. Lots of the pieces are in note-form, a mode which has carefully to balance that sense of the immediacy of the poet writing against fitfulness of rhythm and the risk of flatness. There’s a good bit of anthropomorphism and pathetic fallacy (‘a hard frost lays its cold lips/ to the bushes’; ‘the barge constrained by chains wanting to sail from/ moorings’). And a certain grandiosity, as in this about a football match:

            The performance waits to be opened like a book. Unlike a book
            it is not reliving the past. It flows with time. They are running
            in the invisible sea of time, choices weigh on their feet.
            Pressing on their heels the web of ghost moves:
            woven and unwoven, chosen and not chosen, […]

 It’s a grandiosity that can even get amplified towards mysticism:

            Through a locked door my children enter the past. […]
            When we trod the path in half light to the sunrise
            strewn on water, the sea knew we would one day enter
            the house of my mother and the coast would assent
.

There’s a similar contrast between minor cliché (laughter bubbles, hearts race, ‘he lit up my life’, &c.) and sharp novelty of expression (‘rills of cold’, ‘calligraphic bat’). I did like ‘The dandelions have seized the lawn// with brazen lamps’ and ‘the long autumn/ in gold livery is losing threads’ which spark those gardening-and-weather topics that can be so difficult otherwise to make engrossing. At other times a fine line is drawn between paradox and confusion: ‘Illness is not a metaphor but a cloud at sea’ (where ‘a cloud at sea’ is being used here as a metaphor ‒ for illness) and in the same poem ‘words fall like grenades mining the future’ – grenades can apparently be used for mining, but it did jolt me at first. ‘We reap our harvest of CO2/ glued to our planet’ also conjured peculiar images. The poet says ‘I edit/ hand/ down/ the book unmarred by Errata’ [sic majuscula] but in a literal sense there are quite a few, especially diacritical ones: reguarded? ribbonned? prix fixé? a la modecafé litterateur? entente cordial? (Unless this last is a pun on the amount of drinking the British and Soviet poets are doing…).

If it comes down to personal preferences among all this variety, I was most gripped by the diaristic travel sequence about the Soviet Union, which switches back and forth between Summer 1987 and Winter 1991 and evidences the high prestige of poetry in Soviet society. Also by the poems of childhood, several hair-raising examples of which describe being repeatedly locked in the coal-shed ‘for her own good’. And the fine elegy for Max Levitas, Communist councillor and veteran of the Battle of Cable Street:

            He was part of that movement,
            that lifted itself, rearing like judgement.

Even if The Work of the Wind might perhaps always remain SJ Litherland’s best-known achievement, this collection does provide, for any new readers, a valuable introduction to her extensive interests and range. 

Guy Russell 25th June 2025

Resistance by Colin Campbell Robinson (KFS Press)

Resistance by Colin Campbell Robinson (KFS Press)

This new book of three poem sequences opens with a quote from René Char, who states that 

     History is a long succession of words

          leading to the same conclusions.

           To contradict them is our duty.

Colin Campbell Robinson sees contradiction as a form of resistance which offers clarity, whereas confusion creates collaboration (with the forces of occupation, the enemy). Although rooted in response to the written works of René Char and Yannis Ritsos, both of whom were part of resistance movements, and Josef Koudelka’s photographs of Prague in 1968, it is hard to see Robinson’s prose poem sequences here as more than abstractions.

The work here rambles through an empty city peopled by memories, ghosts who betray, hide, suffer and survive. ‘Everyone is a vagabond in their own home. / Everyone a wanderer lying in their bed.’ Times passes, indeed ‘Time is running out’ and the future is tentative as ‘The angels of tomorrow soar on fragile wings.’ It is a world of brief pleasures – pilsner or ‘a sip of slivovitz’ – failures, ruin and silence; a world where nothing is understood and ‘people stand about doing nothing’ and there is ‘no certainty’.

By inhabiting others’ experiences Robinson ends up in a no-man’s land of secondhand politics and emotions. This is not to belittle Ritsos’ or Char’s poems – both are great writers – nor to demand poems of personal emotion from Robinson, but the sense of distance here is too great: Robinson is a mirror, a reporter, whose words from the present describing the past cannot evoke the realities of oppression or revolutionary resistance. It all feels like a sanitised version, where blood and sweat, Molotov cocktails, sniper fire and the arrival of tanks and soldiers become fading photographs or ‘a rumbling that fades into the distance’.

At one point the final poem’s narrator attempts to pray, but the silence is too much; instead, we get ‘So many Cains, so many Abels, looking for God’s embrace, in the cold dawn, in the dying dusk’, and smashed firebombs provoking the rhetorical question ‘who dances before the Lord?’. The reference to the Psalms, and the text’s juxtaposition with a photo of ‘the oldest synagogue in Europe’ does little to evoke Prague’s ghetto, the story of the Golem, or the very physical act of occupation and dismantling of Prague’s Westernisation in 1968. It simply sends out vague arrows towards ideas Robinson could have made something of.

This book is a world of shorthand, of suggestive phrases and ideas meant to trigger a reader’s feelings: a sense of loss, of hopelessness, of squashed possibility, of mourning, of lost community and family. A dove is used to suggest ideas of peace; a church bell rings, signifying mourning, religion, time passing and perhaps contrasting with the empty city’s silence; ‘Coincidental meanings could collide and create new sense as they speed beyond light’. I’m all for constructing meaning out of experimental or opaque texts, but there is too much signification going on here, too much ‘space’ and ‘light’ and ‘silence’ and ‘blindness’, too many words pre-loaded with meaning, to allow new coincidences or associations to be made.

The poems here mostly feel like pastiche and, in the third sequence, a poetical tour guide to Prague. It made me go back to Ritsos, a favourite author anyway, to the experimental photos of Jiri Kolar, and to contemporaneous accounts of resistance and revolution in France, Greece and Prague. These show the reality, the brutality, of war; whilst the anarchic and utopian poetry of the likes of Adrian Mitchell or Julian Beck propose political, sexual and social revolutions. Robinson’s poetry offers ‘The night eternal dark like a book not written; like a slogan, empty’, but I would rather an attempted book or a revolutionary slogan than this author’s abstract ‘pain of intuition’.

Rupert Loydell 19th June 2025

There’s Everything to Play For: The Poetry of Peter Finch by Andrew Taylor (Seren Books)

There’s Everything to Play For: The Poetry of Peter Finch by Andrew Taylor (Seren Books)

When I reviewed Peter Finch’s Collected Poems One and Collected Poems Two back in 2022, I could not help but discuss Finch’s presence in the small press publishing world from the early 1980s, when I became part of that with my Stride magazine and imprint. Finch was an enabler, a facilitator, an encourager and contributor; he was everywhere you turned in the poetry world. In my earlier 2020 review of his book The Machineries of Joy, I noted that ‘Finch shows no sign of reining in his eccentricities’ and titled that review ‘A Life-time of Astonishment’, which referred to Finch’s lifetime, not mine, although I continue to be astonished by the poet’s work.

Having edited those Collected Poems, Andrew Taylor has gone on to now publish a hybrid biography and critical study of Finch, thankfully concentrating on the latter as a way to facilitate the former. So, only events, activities and associations which have fed in to and influenced Finch’s editing, writing, performing and publishing, are mentioned; there is no nonsense here about the colour of wallpaper, girlfriends or the makes of cars purchased. It is all about poetry and his relationship to it.

Early on, Finch embraced underground, countercultural publishing and stuck with it. In a similar manner he situated his work within the very different, often warring, areas of sound-experiment, comedy, performance art, visual poetry and the mainstream. He was never a weirdy-beardy mumbling in the corner, never an arselicker or cringing academic, never a self-centred ego-tripper, but he could get funding, submit to and persuade both avant-garde and major publishers, talk poetics and critical theory, sweet talk and upset others, as required, and hold his own against those who dismissed his output. 

His knowledge of the history of sound and performance writing was second-to-none, and he frequented the boundaries where it blurred into improvisation, out-jazz, or speaking in tongues. He learnt Welsh and critiqued England’s colonial inclinations towards its neighbour; he used psychogeography, flânerie and landscape writing to document Cardiff and its environs; he shared and taught and challenged both would-be and experienced writers; and he kept up with contemporary issues of digital poetics, AI, sampling and remix. (Taylor suggests this is not new: ‘Finch’s use of technology has always been present in the work.’)

Taylor surmises that Finch’s poetry has changed, perhaps even mellowed, over time (something I might dispute), suggesting that ‘a typical late-period Finch poem’ contains ‘nostalgic reflection, usually focussed on a key memory’ where ‘the level of detail is remarkable’ and resists ‘resorting to the bland anecdotal which is so commonplace in mainstream poetry’. Elsewhere he suggests that ‘Peter Finch has always been seen as “other”‘ and is ‘[n]otoriously difficult to categorise’, this difficulty perhaps leading to an element of critical indifference and mainstream rejection. 

And yet Finch was a poet who charmed those who met him and/or heard him read. His stage presence was of a friendly eccentric, not an arty-farty weirdo. As this book at times make clear, he could do provocation and rebellion when required, but mostly he wanted to get his work read and listened to and found numerous ways to do so. Finch understood rhyme, syncopation, and rhythm, knew how to keep an audience amused, shocked and entertained. He was part of international networks of writers and artists, an avid reader, listener and consumer of new and newly-discovered writers. He read to understand what language could and might do, whether as decomposed text on the page, political manifesto, comic absurdism, surreal chant or seemingly personal confession.

Taylor gets all this. His 200 page book is as thorough, reasoned and generous as Finch’s own books. His critical engagement with Finch’s writing is astute but highly readable, as are his contextual discussions where he notes influences, mentors, examples and inspirations. As Taylor notes at the close of the book, ‘Though nothing is assured, what we can be certain of is that Peter Finch will continue to write poetry, innovate, walk Wales and push language to extremes.’ I really do hope so.

Rupert Loydell 29th April 2025

For All That’s Lost by David Miller (Knives, Forks and Spoons Press)

For All That’s Lost by David Miller (Knives, Forks and Spoons Press)

Fragmented images repeated in forms that circle without repeating exactly, variations forming ripples emanating from a central loss and finding a variety of means to muse on what it is that has been lost. David Miller’s For All That’s Lostcombines poems, prose poems and paintings, both recent and past, to create a collage of responses to loss:

            Fragmented images building a narrative rather than merely interrupting or illustrating it.

            Dispersed narrative.

            Unfolding, regenerating narrative. 

At the heart of the more recent material is the loss of his late wife Dodo (the philosopher Doreen Maitre) in 2022, and, therefore, we are once again in the space inhabited by 2024’s What Is and Might Be and then Otherwise some of which ‘explicitly or implicitly involved mourning as well as reflection and contemplation in the wake of that loss’.

I wrote of (close), another recent volume which is haunted by grief, that Miller “examines words and phrases as if they are displayed on a rotating stand enabling us to view them from a myriad of different perspectives”. This minimalist style of writing in which each word holds a weight of meaning in a precisely positioned place on the page was intuited by Miller from the American poet and mystic Robert Lax. In this collection, Lax also contributes a telling phrase in paraphrase – ‘Black is everything that black can be’. 

Black is both the terrifying place where For All That’s Now Lost ends:

                                    Black

            waters and black sky …

            lights spiralling

            in the darkness –

            and I am not the one at the wheel.

and the beginning of ‘Again: Black ink in the Palace of Bees’ where, as Frances Presley explains he moves in this series of ‘poems-in-pictures’ “from a wash of black ink, through widening strips of gold and amber, containing fragments, possibly cells or seeds, until there is a containing border of deep pink”.

This pilgrimage in paint resonates with the exploration of spirituality – another exploration shared with Lax – that takes us back “to the Gospels and Acts”:

            A tree. An angel.

            A nativity. A cruc-

            Ifixion. A

            resurrection.

As musician, painter, poet and writer, Miller is a polymath and, while recognising the potential for ideas to be sparked or explored more deeply through an interplay or interweaving of disciplines, he also acknowledges the limits of such play and weaving in the awareness that they do not become one and the same when brought into relation:

            poetry isn’t painting

            poetry isn’t music …

            nor is poetry … is it

            anthropology?

            no nor religion

            yet each might learn

            from each other

            possibly

            in some instances

            but not become the other

This is the hope of all the playful intertwining of genres and styles, of disciplines and narratives, of losses and gaps, fragments and forms, that characterises and shapes Miller’s works and collections. He utilises ‘concision, elision, contrast and paradox to open up meanings as one opens up Matryoshka Dolls’ and does so in the hope that each might learn one from the other, even in the midst of loss – especially in the time of loss – when the one that is lost is walking alongside and ‘what surpasses death / is transgressive’.

Jonathan Evens 8th April 2025

The Salvation Engine by Rupert M. Loydell (Analogue Flashback)

The Salvation Engine by Rupert M. Loydell (Analogue Flashback)

Recent reports on abuse scandals linked to the Church of England bring unfortunate reminders of an earlier scandal, Sheffield’s the Nine O’clock Service (NOS). The central instigator of the NOS, Chris Brain, is shortly to stand trial on one charge of rape and 33 counts of indecent assault relating to 11 women.

Rupert Loydell was brought up attending a Baptist Church and experienced a fairly traditional nonconformist faith. Although he has become sceptical of dogma and conviction, he continues to explore the motivations for belief both in his poetry and his writing on culture. In The Salvation Engine he grapples with the frightful mix of personality cults, religious populism, liturgical experiment, rave culture, and lack of safeguarding and accountability, which allowed abuse and manipulation to thrive in NOS.

Like Ed Gillett in Party Lines: Dance Music and the Making of Modern Britain, the voices which speak in The Salvation Engine acknowledge “the NOS’s profound appeal: spiritual uplift and utopianism, all set to transportive music”. So, in ‘Touching Distance’ (as, too, in poems such as ‘Deeply Sorry’ and ‘Shining Brightly’) we move from positive to negative experiences:

from

                                                Existential dilemmas

were welcome in the cathedral, prompting

blinding displays of apocalyptic gospel,

tectonic shifts of techno-ambient hymns,

congregations high from dancing lights. 

to

                                                thundercrash

            riffs trigger flashbacks tonight, along with

            detailed disclosures of wild behaviour.

            A cataclysm of murderous noise lubricates

            conversations about emerging dark manias,

            slow-burning psychosexual abuse. 

‘A Gleeful Leaving’ and ‘Rap Messiah’ focus on the dangers posed by charismatic spiritual gurus who are allowed to operate without constraints or accountability:

                                    The burden of safeguarding

was put aside, one ticket admitted you

to hurt children, young women and men,

archival footage and mixed-media collage.

For the guru:

            Hell is being shut inside an alien heaven

unable to even compose a goodbye note.

Today he will be all by himself in paradise.

For the victims:

            I am in a dilemma with regard to narrative,

            am alienated from my own story. Sometimes

            I just sink into the day, numb and sobbing.

There is anger and frustration expressed at repeating patterns of abuse:

            Haven’t we been here before,

            watching the embers of megalomania and reason blow away?

            The spell is broken. Lucidity hits. We’ve been treated like dirt.

and there is a degree of hope explored among those who were victims:

            Storm clouds and strong winds prevail,

            I expect to find misunderstanding,

            befuddled glances and wary responses,

            limited versions of ourselves, the dark

            side of liturgy and religious process.

            Come on. Across the border we go.

Loydell’s main way of writing poetry in recent years has been to assemble phrases into a poem; phrases which come from a range of sources to create poems ‘that offer more questions than answers’. As a result, we should not simply equate the narrator’s voice in his poems with the author’s voice and need to remember that those who were involved in NOS do not speak about the experience with one voice either, but from multiple perspectives. This collection is deliberately polyphonic as a result.

With this collection, as with all his work, Loydell wants to challenge his readers to think about what language is and how ‘it is used around and indeed against us’, as ‘language is how we think about and construct the world’. After all, that is how the leaders of NOS created a space in which abuse could occur:

            You imaged God as a packet of razor blades,

            useful for noble and honourable purposes

            but using metaphors, parables and similes

            to round us up and convince us.

Jonathan Evens 1st April 2025

Summer to Summer Looking by Gill McEvoy (Cinnamon Press)

Summer to Summer Looking by Gill McEvoy (Cinnamon Press)

It is always a joy to read Gill McEvoy’s discerning poems with their perceptions and insights and microcosmic observations. In this pamphlet, Summer to Summer Looking we see the narrator’s clarity of attentiveness that can wait and watch for the special moment when one can hear ‘the thinnest trill’ of the dipper and notice in its flight ‘the bright moon / of its small breast’ that shines like snow. )’The Bird by the River’). Elsewhere, the ‘crowned heads’ of two crested grebes are held in the air ‘like hieroglyphics’ (‘At Stover’) while an ‘October Forecast’ lists a season of ‘sharp stars, huge moons’ but also of ‘slow moving wasps and bluebottles’.

Throughout the poems in ‘Summer to Summer Looking’ there is a keen awareness of changes in climate patterns.  ‘Drought’ is a particularly vivid and horrifying poem with the sun rising ‘from its blood-streaked bed’ in a ‘blinding sky’ as it burns and scorches the earth and ‘flames take hold of dried-out edges.’ Birds and plants in a later winter season mistake milder weather for signs of spring although, ominously, ‘snow is forecast’. (February Afternoon’)

The quality that appeals to me most of all in Gill McEvoy’s poetry is an impression of transcendence, a symbolism that lies beneath the everyday. One of the most beautiful poems is ‘To Watch a Cloud is Consoling. Always’ where the narrator on her sickbed has been ‘sent’ a cloud as a special gift and observes it shift from being the shape of ‘a grey horse resting in a field’ to becoming a cloud again, ‘as such shapes do’. Yet this gift, this cloud, this grey horse does not disappear. In some way the narrator feels it is ever present.

‘Haunting the Pool by the Bridge’ is a more sombre poem in that it depicts the futile search for the kingfisher’s ‘un-nerving shock of blue’ which would be ‘the longed-for vision’ to ‘fill our hearts with radiance.’ On this occasion it is not to be, but there is hope and a ‘kind of glory’ in the later poem ‘Dealing with the Straying Sheep at the Holiday Cottage’ where someone, possibly a child, has gone out ‘in the dark alone’ to rescue a sheep and afterwards walked about the kitchen in wet bare feet leaving, as a sign of passage, ‘shining prints of night-dew’. 

Mandy Pannett 28th March 2025